Tunes For Kids: Third Verse

January 22, 2009 - 9:19 pm No Comments

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More riders ( I mean writers)  for “The Peppermint Pony”

Several suggestions for the first line or two of the third verse came in, and I’ve been going over them to determine the righ fit. I believe I have it. Thanks for the ideas. Keep ‘em flowing.

Here’s what we have for the new tune, now:

I cast my gaze to the bright sky
That slowly fades into the night sky.
Stars like sparkling candy twinkle in my mind’s eye.

My pony’s red with a white stripe.
We’re riding down through a snow pipe.
Snowflakes flicker around me; the weather is just my type.

On the Peppermint Pony…
I can ride beyond the daylight into the twilight.
On the Peppermint Pony…
I can dream about the sweet flight into the safe night…
On the Peppermint Pony.

The lemon moon is a gumdrop.
We take a bite and do a flip-flop.

Nice going. I think it’s shaping up to be an excellent third verse. Now get your imagination going and send me some “back-up”, and…

Stay tuned,

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