I Want A Pony…it’s coming along
Yeah…the classic line for a kid when asked what they want for their birthday is “I want a pony.”
And I want a Peppermint Pony. Good news is…we now have 2 more lines. I guess you’re all really shy about adding to the lyrics. Even the ones who’ve sent in lines say they don’t want their name shown. I’ll respect that, but you’re doing a great job. I think you ought to let everyone know. Besides I’m gonna be giving MP3′s and a CD away. I’ll have to talk about winners.
Seriously…thanks to everyone who’s been a part so far. But we’ve still got a way to go. I’ll need another line for the second verse, and then we’ll make the chorus. I think it’s shaping up nicely. Maybe if you think about Christmas and sugar plum fairies some other lines and word pictures will dance in your head. Send ‘em on.
Here are the lines up to the point we’ve reached so far…
I cast my gaze to the bright sky
That slowly fades into the night sky.
Stars like sparkling candy twinkle in my mind’s eye.
My pony’s red with a white stripe.
We’re riding down through a snow pipe.
I realize the 3rd line of the second verse will be hard, but you can do it. Send me something to rhyme with stripe and pipe. And remember…we’re building toward the chorus. Let ‘er rip.
Stay tuned,
